Thank you for taking the time to read my short stories and to provide feedback using the form below.
Please tell me what you liked and disliked about the story; what you thought worked, didn't work; what could have been done better. Is the story interesting? Do like the characters, or not? And any other useful comment you would like to make. Be as detailed or concise as you wish.
Please use the fake email address "me@home.com" as a way to remain anonymous should you want to, but specify which story you are commenting on at the start of your feedback.
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